The Last Straw (the essay that got me into Harvard)

 “One, two, three, LIFT!”  My brother and I step back from our efforts.  The moonlight casts a pearly glow over the field of hay, and a coyote howls in the distance.  Before us, massive and beautiful, stands a monument to the gods.  It is Stonehenge, made of bales of hay.  We are standing in our neighbor’s field, shuffling quietly to take in the entire structure.  He does not know we are even out here.  One ton of hay, stacked into pillars, with a ring of bales around the top.  He will be surprised, to say the least.  We have actually done him a favor by gathering all his hay to one area.  My brother and I admire it for a long moment, and then take off for home.  The next day, I hear rumors of aliens.
 Everyone got a good chuckle out of that one.  I received a picture of my neighbor standing next to “Hayhenge” with an arm pointing to the sky.  He was smiling.  Someone asked, “How in the world did you get the idea to do something like that?”  The truth is, I do not know.  I drove by a hay field, and it occurred to me that a hay structure would be amusing.  Stonehenge popped to mind.  The opportunity presented itself, and I took the initiative.  I grabbed my brother, and, after some careful planning, we tiptoed in that night and built Hayhenge in a couple of hours.
 It was a lot of work.  We tried stacking the bales, but they kept falling down.  My brother began to despair, but I would not be beaten.  After some deliberation, I had the idea of building scaffolding from other bales.  It worked perfectly.  Now it was just a matter of putting in the work to stack one ton of hay into a majestic monument.  To put bales up high, we built a staircase from other bales.  When it was completed, Hayhenge stood tall and serene amid a sea of alfalfa.
 The wonder of Hayhenge was that it began as a spontaneous urge.  I took a funny idea and made a project out of it.  I planned everything.  It had four lines of symmetry.  The altar pointed due north.  The entire structure was aligned with the path of the moon.  After that, my brother and I worked diligently to make things just right.  Hayhenge was a sturdy structure which I am sure would have lasted for eons had our neighbor not hauled his hay to the barn later the next day.
 Hayhenge is a prime example of how I solve problems.  I begin with an opportunity and take the initiative.  I make plans and modify ideas until everything falls into place.  Creative insights help make the project run smoothly.  Finally, I employ my plan with the meticulous precision and the hard work it takes to make everything work.  A sense of humor helps bring it all together.