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Okay so lets kill the word by word story and go with sentence by sentence instead. Same idea but you can contribute a bit more. | |
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Once upon a time, there was... | |
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It had started off as a very quiet night when Eric Korpela got a frantic call to report to U.C. Berkeley immediately. | |
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but first he had to find his pants. | |
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The one with his wallet in it. | |
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But wait, are those his pants in the tree outside the window? | |
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Did Angela let the raccoons in again? | |
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Did Eric let someone else in? | |
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All of these questions were interrupted as a flash of bright light came through the window that had previously displayed the hanging pants. | |
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Good to know he found them, as the way he zips along, license and registration are required. | |
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Meanwhile at the dean’s office, everyone was still waiting for Eric to show up. | |
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Andrew J. Szeri (Dean) marches back and forth awaiting the arrival of Eric. | |
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As Eric is already doing 80+ from CV to Berkeley, his mind is in knots, wondering about the emergency. | |
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In the top dower of the Dean’s desk, Valblick the first visitor to earth from its home world in the Swan constellation also known as Cygnus, was thinking; they can’t be as backward as they look since they have beer here. | |
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Suddenly Eric bursts into the deans office and shouts... | |
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You wanted more beer, sigh, I thougt you ran out of Margarita mix in the Lab elevator. | |
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Suddenly, Eric realized that he had never put on any pants. | |
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Angela at the sight of him then rememeberd anew why she had fallen in love all those many years ago. | |
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Can you imagine the scandal if Eric would leave the house without his pants? | |
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It was then The Dean noticed the two raccoons standing | |
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